Global Warming: The Urgent Impact of Greenhouse Gases and Human Activities
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Climate change impacts our planet. The Earth's temperature increases due to greenhouse gases emitted by activities like burning fossil fuels and deforestation. These emissions trap heat in the atmosphere leading to global warming. Consequences include rising sea levels, more frequent extreme weather events, and disruption of ecosystems.
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The ongoing assault of climate change has profound implications for our planet's health and stability. Global temperatures soar as a consequence of greenhouse gases, which are predominantly emitted by activities such as the combustion of fossil fuels and deforestation. These gases act like an insulating blanket in Earth's atmosphere, trapping heat and catalyzing global warming phenomena.
The repercussions of this environmental crisis are far-reaching: sea levels are on the rise, threatening coastal cities worldwide; extreme weather events have become more commonplace and increasingly destructive; ecosystems are under unprecedented stress, disrupting biodiversity and ecological balance.
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